1 page work read the instruction. I only need the revision based on the instruction

Your partner is listed below, before you start tuning up their work however, read “Getting Your Work in ShapeACTIONS .” Follow the steps outlined, as well as your own intuitive craft knowledge to revise your partner’s draft.

• Actually revise your partner’s work. DO NOT simply suggest revisions, make revisions. Rewrite the sentences and lines. The revision as a whole should be significant; not just a change of a few words here and there, but a thorough reworking of sentences and lines using the “Getting Your Work in Shape” document.
• Use boldface, underlining, italics, colored font, comments, or other means (the suggestions tool is very useful) to highlight the changes you’ve made to the text.
• Feel free to offer a brief explanation of why you made the revisions you did. This is not required, but it could be very useful for the original author’s creative process.